Finally sentence structure and grammar, we're going to look at those together since they really have to do with the mechanics of the essay.The really solid thing that this essay does is offer lots of sentence variety.
Very clearly the essay states, ' The solution lies in offering a wider variety of classes, which ultimately encourages students to stay in school.' They're not straddling in the fence, they tell you what it is they're going to prove that they should go with 'the offering a wider variety of classes,' and gives the reason.
The reason behind this is that 'it ultimately encourages students to stay in school.' Alright let's take a look at ' Complexity and development.' So here is where the readers are really looking for you to show a global view that you've considered all different viewpoints and then supported it with specific examples.
We're going to lump some of those indicators together just for easy sake because they really go hand in hand.
So let's talk about how it did with 'task and position.' This essay did a really solid job of setting up the task, showing an understanding of it and then taking a strong position.
I'm going to read through the first paragraph with you but, it would be essential for you to have it printed out in front of you.
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Alright so it starts, ' The perennial problem facing schools in the country today is dropout rates.
This stubborn blight has refused to go away despite of a variety of methods enacted by schools to get rid of it.
In a certain school, two of these methods have been proposed-either offering free tutoring or offering a wider variety of classes.
If you look at the end of body paragraph number one it ends with the sentence, ' Furthermore, their grades improve in other classes as a result, brightening their paths to graduation.' And then it picks up body paragraph number two with the reference the same paths, says 'what may not brighten those paths is free tutoring.' So instead of going to those canned transitions like, 'on the other hand' or 'now I'm going to talk about' it just hits this idea this reference to these paths.
So that's a really strong natural transition that really strengthens the organization of the essay.